tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.comments2018-10-25T03:14:09.801-07:00Thoughts for the Absent MindJaredhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08616991031174431847noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-85080896050292522992011-07-09T10:07:55.791-07:002011-07-09T10:07:55.791-07:00This comment has been hidden from the blog.Jaredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08616991031174431847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-59065302761883925392011-06-27T09:19:11.454-07:002011-06-27T09:19:11.454-07:00This comment has been hidden from the blog.practicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05683589481404422674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-12382110661512063422011-05-18T14:35:02.866-07:002011-05-18T14:35:02.866-07:00Hmmm ... there's a lot I could say here but .....Hmmm ... there's a lot I could say here but ...Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-46194300598287202282010-10-10T05:44:13.328-07:002010-10-10T05:44:13.328-07:00This story moves along like a freight train that d...This story moves along like a freight train that dares the reader to jump off! Wonderful dialogue too! A pleasure to read.Salvatore Buttacihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17477098872186908154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-87219800548449733122010-09-23T17:01:52.235-07:002010-09-23T17:01:52.235-07:00I don't feel qualified to comment on this. Ev...I don't feel qualified to comment on this. Every other word made me tilt my head to the side and think, His keen perception and insights are powerful, everything the best writer needs and THEN! The writing itself! I want to ditto everything above, expecially Gita and Mike's comments. I'm speechless, REALLY. This was amazing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-68802978736052243772010-09-23T16:34:21.893-07:002010-09-23T16:34:21.893-07:00I'm flattered not just by the feedback but tha...I'm flattered not just by the feedback but that you had the time for my little story. Thank you all. This may be recurring in another media soon... Stay tuned!Jaredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08616991031174431847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-91747018868789499572010-09-21T21:14:46.529-07:002010-09-21T21:14:46.529-07:00excellent, original, totally believable!excellent, original, totally believable!practicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05683589481404422674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-59512992425665829342010-09-21T05:36:43.377-07:002010-09-21T05:36:43.377-07:00That was a fun read top to bottom Jared. Loved the...That was a fun read top to bottom Jared. Loved the originality and humor. I liked that there was a personel office for the villains as well as the heros and the realistic relationship of brothers who can be opposite sides of a coin. Great work!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-17660315801326107372010-09-21T01:07:49.482-07:002010-09-21T01:07:49.482-07:00Rich and twisting - like chocolate barley sugar - ...Rich and twisting - like chocolate barley sugar - I'm going to need to re-read to fully appreciate and to re-savour, but am currently too sated. Nice one Jared.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-25981175815314811532010-09-20T22:30:07.430-07:002010-09-20T22:30:07.430-07:00Who could have seen this coming? Have you already ...Who could have seen this coming? Have you already sold the rights to Hollywood? The scene in the mother's yard is super, and it just gets better from there on. This had fun woven all through it, even in it's grimy moments. Excellent, Jared, just excellent.MDJBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17793388758122524855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-11573197641383915802010-09-20T16:20:09.977-07:002010-09-20T16:20:09.977-07:00Ditto Gita's words. But your closing line is w...Ditto Gita's words. But your closing line is what really blew me away.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-82793256241821267102010-09-20T16:14:44.562-07:002010-09-20T16:14:44.562-07:00Wham! Bam! How many words of praise can I fit into...Wham! Bam! How many words of praise can I fit into this white comment box and where to start? Killer humor. Originality plus. Favorite lines? How about "The girls at this desk were beautiful. Go weak at the knees, crash your car just to get a better look, fall to genuflect and propose as you pass them on the street kind of beautiful." And that's just for starters. This is the Gita Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02883735348008779245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-11237825974006776442010-06-30T07:10:29.908-07:002010-06-30T07:10:29.908-07:00Thanks. You have seen this one a while back. This ...Thanks. You have seen this one a while back. This was my reply to the "Sexy Touch" Challenge. I'm just padding my Blog with previously unposted 6S stuff until I can fine tune some new shorts. Glad it still reads well!Jaredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08616991031174431847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1369794142311524396.post-79366032095397756432010-06-29T17:05:21.560-07:002010-06-29T17:05:21.560-07:00Have I read a piece of this in another forum? If s...Have I read a piece of this in another forum? If so, I'm sure I adored it then as I do now. I love the dialogue, and the parting line kicks ass!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com